22A – Elevator Pitch No. 3
1. Link to my video In my last pitch, I was told that my pitch was good and easy to understand. The only thing that I really needed to fix was the length. It was a tad bit too long last time. The one feedback I got that surprised me as that one peer stated that he could tell I had viewed other pitches i order to make mines good. I took the feedback I got and deleted some parts that I was told could be left out. Specifically, some parts from my opening and the statistic I had included. Since this is only my second pitch, I don’t have it completely memorized just yet. However, I am more comfortable in front of the camera.
Hi Nathalie,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, great post! I think we, as students, can all relate to your experience. I myself can think of many times that I have not studied enough for something and faced consequences because of it. The hardest part about it is not being able to blame anyone but yourself, just like you said above.