17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2 Submit Assignment




https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7DRuMOWNwXM

I did not submit a pitch for the previous assignment so I did not use any feedback and haven't changed anything.

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  1. UnknownOctober 28, 2018 at 7:49 AM

    Good morning Nathalie,
    You did a great job! I liked your use of body language and the personal touch you added. I also enjoyed your last line it was catchy and sticks with you. If you want to to make it a little shorter you might be able to cut some of the first half. Maybe just the opening and then the statistic.

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  2. UnknownOctober 29, 2018 at 1:11 PM

    Hello Nathalie,
    Really great elevator pitch! I thought you communicated you message well and spoke in an easy-to-understand speed and tone. I thought you did a great job of pulling the viewer in and pitching your product. Although you didn't have feedback to reflect on, you could tell you had viewed others and considered other students' feedback in making yours.

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