17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2 Submit Assignment
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7DRuMOWNwXM
I did not submit a pitch for the previous assignment so I did not use any feedback and haven't changed anything.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7DRuMOWNwXM
I did not submit a pitch for the previous assignment so I did not use any feedback and haven't changed anything.
Good morning Nathalie,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! I liked your use of body language and the personal touch you added. I also enjoyed your last line it was catchy and sticks with you. If you want to to make it a little shorter you might be able to cut some of the first half. Maybe just the opening and then the statistic.
Hello Nathalie,
ReplyDeleteReally great elevator pitch! I thought you communicated you message well and spoke in an easy-to-understand speed and tone. I thought you did a great job of pulling the viewer in and pitching your product. Although you didn't have feedback to reflect on, you could tell you had viewed others and considered other students' feedback in making yours.